Thursday, December 17, 2009

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Behind your tightlipped mouth
is a smile that don't want to flash
and a joy trailing your inner voice

I thought i may see an effort to resist
watched your cheeks elevate and blush
perhaps fake interest in your furrowed brows

but clearly you'll never speak of your love
but clearly you'll never speak of your love.

9 comments:

  1. Yes, very nice poem and a good photo, BJE..Love loses essence when one speaks of it, so I feel....But I'll say I love that soft cactus :)

    wishes,
    devIKA

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  2. This is so precious, beautiful...hesitant and loving, and the photo, well...perfect for the prose :)

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  3. I thought i may see an effort to resist
    watched your cheeks elevate and blush
    perhaps fake interest in your furrowed brows


    Lovely lines. There is a lingering acceptance here...

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  4. unspoken; like the theme of your poem, is the beauty of the cactus

    much love
    gillena

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  5. Beautiful Words and nice shot !! Colors are so soothing !!

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  6. a poem about the spirit hiding behind the lips.

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  7. Thanks everybody. Welcome Unseen R. I want to wish everyone a joyous and blessed holidays.

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