Monday, November 23, 2009

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dear old heart
did i miss my chance
when standing next to a tree
the lightning strikes the cow instead?

7 comments:

  1. ohhh....I favour cows than humans; don't feel bad BJE :)


    i liked it, for the clean wit though :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. I'm glad that the lightning got the cow and not you, my friend. A cow could never write poetry as lovely as yours. :)

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  3. It such a giving image, your thoughts are kind, and I don't want you to ever stop writing :)

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  4. BJE, Lorraine's comment takes me in an other direction...that I didn't see at the time....and I think, she is right :)

    Your thoughts were kind, sorry that I didn't see it before :)

    Happy Thanksgiving BJE :)

    Wishes,
    devika

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  5. i think not; you were struck, as any good poet should be

    much love
    gillena

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  6. My thanksgiving wishes to everybody, you guys are something i am thankful for as i extend myself in the blogworld.

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