Be a captive
of everyday words
door, window, roof
walls, the four corners of the house
for here
the secrets of the closet are magnified.
Be captivated
by everyday dreams
school, job, family
and a poetry book on the bedside table
for life
though a mere breath
is a gust lapping the ocean waves.
Wow. Brilliant lines here
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wow! this is brilliant, BJE :)
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devika
Movement...orchestra, it's fantastic, wow BJE, you've got the groove
ReplyDeleteabsolutely precious words
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gillena
life in captivity . . . sounds like a good thing
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ReplyDeleteI share these feelings. That last line is wonderful.
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a meager breath
Grand, BJE! _m
This is unbelievably brilliant....and I feel like you found a little peephole into my soul. Amazing, BJE!
ReplyDeleteThank you all for the lovely comments.
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