Wednesday, October 21, 2009

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Silence
envelops the scene
the hills bow
and a muffled air awaits
the battlecry to pierce the steel.

7 comments:

  1. Love it, BJE....absolutely :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. both; the photo and each line of your poem built an anticipation for what was coming. your last line made me chuckle, I suppose because I did not see it coming.

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  3. ...and the silent souls wait... to join and purge.

    Well done, BJE. _m

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  4. aweful,beautiful, no room for war, only silence, I love this BJE ;)

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  5. Thank you all, really looking forward on seeking solace in silence sometime soon...

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